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©2004-2010 ~vidette
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On a train, in the country, my life sped past
I was waiting for you
You were leaving
Your hand on the door

I tried to hear what you said
I couldn't
There was too much noise
The train, the passengers, the music,thebaby,thetracks,thewind,therushi ngonand on ...

But when you were gone, something broke
and the noises stopped
and I could hear your footfalls.
Every
single
one.


Well, I just wrote that then - I usually write poems on the fly. With very little editing. I can't edit them for some reason, well, I guess there are many reasons, so there you go. Not so much to do with the pic, cept it's on a train and I was in the country.

*shrugs*

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I like the picture and the poem! woo!

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September 29, 2004
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May 1, 2004, 8:00:00 AM

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